It's pretty good.
I honestly loved the begining. Although the turning point at 1:22 was very unexpected. I didn't really like the music into that part. But the piano is really good. And when are you going to get a mic for "Tearing Through My Oblivion" and the other music videos? I look forward into your future work.
Plus, one more thing I don't really like to this song is that even though it has a good beat, it's a bit simple. And I know you made it that way so it'd be easy to remember. But after Tearing Through My Oblivion and the past music, I'm sure you can do better. Not calling this completely bad, but you should know what I'm say.
Kayz I'm done.